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for This Cock Is Mine

by quinnfabraysmut

schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Cute story and very hot.
person Agrinho
schedule August 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OP here -

This chapter was once again perfect. I loved every bit of it and I also love the progress.

I liked the nuance when Quinn called herself a slut and Santiago went against that. And YAY for them being a couple now! Can't wait to see smug Quinn at school (if you include that, it's fine if you don't).

I love this story so much I'm sad knowing it will have to end one day, but I hope that day isn't soon.

Thank you so much for this unbelievably amazing fill!
person Ads
schedule August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OP here. Damn, whenever I'm convinced this story can't get better, it does! Seriously, this is so far beyond perfect. It's the ideal prompt fill. I never could have hoped the prompt would be picked up so, so well. I love everything about this. I was a little worried the actual sex wouldn't be in this chapter and then it was! I thought maybe Santiago would help her stretch with his own fingers, but Quinn doing it herself was so hot as well. If you want Santiago going down on Quinn (would be nice if he hadn't shaved...) but absolutely not required. Feel free to do as you please! Thank you so much!
person Ads
schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OP here - This is beyond my imagination. I adore this - the smut, but also the pace and ow there's no angst, I love how both just go with it.

I also like how both are so in character. You're doing such a good job with Santiago too. And I love the variation between swallowing and facial.

I don't think I ever want this perfect story to end. My firstborn is definitely for you.

May you write genderswap Quinntana smut forever!
person kate
schedule August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
can you just write stories forever? they're always so damn good!
person Ads
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OP here - this prompt fill is awesome, even better than I imagined. You rock! Can't wait to see how this continues :)