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November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I'd say Is never ever ever have two characters speaking dialogue in the same paragraph.
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May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning.
I like the discussion between the two and the sex scene between the mother and the daughter.
I look forward to see the next chapter.
I like the discussion between the two and the sex scene between the mother and the daughter.
I look forward to see the next chapter.