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by SeasonofSons

schedule April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a terrific story, very believable!
schedule April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG that was so sweet. You do occasionally get to see Tig's softer side, even though the guy is a freakin' maniac. Great chapter.
schedule April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4! Damn that was hot. I love how you portray all the guys, very true to character. I do have a small suggestion which is starting a new paragraph break every time a different character speaks, otherwise it's sometimes hard to follow who's saying what. Otherwise a really great story, I love it.