First off I want to say I LOVE your fanfic, and your writing style. I'm easily able to tell who's talking and who's point of view or thoughts are being gone over without always needing the persons name in the paragraph; which is tricky to find in fanfiction. Secondly I really do like how the characters are always kept in character, which includes how annoying some characters; Michael namely; can be in their behaviour are still lovable goofballs.
I really do ship Jackie and Hyde pretty strongly, I always thought they were a good for each other simply because Jackie needs a man that won't be manipulated (unless it's something he planned on doing anyway) and can really be there for her. And Hyde needs a lady like her whom will prompt for attention, affection, so that he doesn't loose interest or have a chance to pull away to prevent the risk of getting hurt.
I'm at the edge of my seat with eveything that happened thus far, I am so curious as to what's going to happen next. I can hardly wait for the next chapter, but of course it's worth the wait!