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And then what happened?

Aw...I loved Derek helping Castiel out like that. It's so sweet. I can only imagine just how much hotter this story is going to get between Dean and Cas, though. Oh man...I can't wait! I love your writing style, and I love how you take the time to explain things and work to make the emotions and characters feel realistic, as well as take the time to develop plot. Also, the way you describe the sex scene parts...wow, they're hot and amazing. I absolutely love this story and I especially loved the first part to this. Finally, I thought it was neat you put this story in Cas's point of view because it just adds a deeper layer to the story and the reader gets to see a very different but still undeniably cute Cas. Well done!

ferret nin

Ah! Cliffhanger! Jerk! <3 Put more out soon, k? Love you.

This is such a cute story! I love your portrayal of Castiel, you've totally nailed him (pun intended).

What a great story-line! Cas is just too adorable (as always) and I think you've got his interactions with people and with Dean down pat. It's really great, and I've enjoyed reading this and the prologue. I can't wait for more!

Such a darling story and isn’t Derek just precious? Seriously, he’s got to be one of the most charming literary creations I’ve ever read. He’s every bit as adorable as he thinks Castiel is. (You could spread him on bread; he’s so sweet tonight.) However, I do think it a bit too coincidental that Castiel should find someone who’s friends with a hunter and happens to believe in the supernatural. But maybe something about the angel just pulled Derek to him.

The scene where they go out shopping is stereotypical in its homosexual cliché. (Oh, of course, Derek would know what to get Castiel; gay men just have such an unerring fashion sense, don’t they?) But somehow you avoid making it too silly and I couldn’t be offended by it. (Then again, I’m not gay; a homosexual might have a different opinion.) But, yes, I did think the Columbo look Castiel always sports is boring. He really does need a change of clothing. The alteration alone would be enough to get Dean’s attention and the hunter would have to be stupid not to realize the new clothing was for him.

I can see all sorts of hijinks and danger resulting from Derek coming along to meet Dean and Sam. But it also might be fun, especially when Dean realizes that Castiel told Derek about the time both of them had sex. Castiel might even mention it in front of Sam. Eek!

I want to see an update to this story soon, please. It’s a shame to let it lapse just when I’ve found a brand new m/m couple to occupy my…attention.

I absolutely love this so far! I really hope you do continue it!

Soooooo I keep checking to see if you are going to add another part. PahLeeeeeeeeeeeeeze do! I wanna read more!! HaHa. Lovin it!

That was awesome! I can't wait to read the rest. Hopefully Dean gets jealous of Derek lol.

Loving the stories! Can't wait to see what happens at the bar with Dean and Cas and his new found friend Derek!!