AFF Fiction Portal
person Azucena
schedule July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I read this and I feel there's hope for men and women yet. You write her sassy, and you write that he likes her sassy. And then you write them into brain-melting sex that's an expression of pure (and impure) joy! And we just know that there'll be more between them, built on that connection. I hope there'll be other occasions for these two hot chickens: they're too good to waste on a one-off impromptu supper. They deserve Breakfast and Beyond.

Miami just got a whole lot hotter in your clever hands. Thanks for the ride. X