rate_review Reviews

I loved this story. The two of them together is really cute. I hope nothing bad happens to John. I'm off to read the next one and find out.

How cruel of you to end it that way!!! I'm going to find the next installment right this second!!

Right came upon this story while waiting for season three to start (those bastards). So freaking good couldn't put it down!!

Seeing as I've read this entire fiction, you've clearly drawn me in. Without a doubt, you make a compelling creative team.
Just a tiny, nit-picky word then, if you'll tolerate me.
Language is a tricky affair. It can enrich, or detract. Some warnings you might consider:

Chuffed is good. Extremely pleased. Brilliant!

Hair is not fringe. Calling it so gives a sense of drapery, which always details my enjoyment of a scene. (Beware stereotypical fanfic descriptive terminology, in general.)

That's all. I hope that wasn't terribly painful, and I look forward to more work, more growth, and some excellent fiction!
Thanks for sharing.

Entertaining, engaging, well written. Nice slow introduction to a more intimate relationship. I cannot wait to read the next story in this line!

This story is one of the best I have ever read on any of these fanfic sites. How could you leave us on such an awesome cliff hanger. I bet you did it with a smile and an evil laugh. I haven't been this upset by a cliff hanger since....well Sherlock BBC. :-) Please keep up the fantastic work. I will be checking this website every day, somethimes even twice, untill the second part starts. Enjoy your well deserved hiatus and thank you for so many hours of entertainment.

Andrea

You leave it like that before a hiatus? Whahahaha thats brilliant writing (tho omg what a place to leave it)

i dont know how long youre on hiatus for, but I hope that i'll know somehow when youre back. :) Brilliant story as always.

This is such a great story. I rush to my computer every night when I get home just to see if you have updated. Thank you updating as much as you do. Cuddling is so much more sexy now. Keep giving up the goods.

Andrea

I really like this story, its so cute but at the same time so heartbreaking lol

Did try to find your tumblr, cos I have one of those. :) But couldnt find it :(

Anyway, will wiat for the next chapter happily.

Wonderful, this is the only Sherlock story I am going to read until I it is finished, that way it doesn't get muddled by the rest. Of all the reunion senarios out there this one makes so much sense, love the addiction throw back. Not to mention you even found a way to incorporate the whole Mycroft and Lestrade relationship. I was just thinking the other day how no one story has done that and then here you are. My absolute favorite thing is the whole need for physical contact and it's slow progression to something sexual. Wow, no one else knew how to make the relationship start realistically. Please continue writing as well as you have.

Andrea