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for When Misery Loves Its Company

by RustyPeach

person shatzen83
schedule May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact that they finally went outside his house but again, she's acting totally out of character. Did she have the lobotomy or is she such a good actress because she's so afraid of him? I hope you'll write an update answering mu question. I love the way you desribed his jelousy but I don't like the fact you made him look sloppy, please go back to the neat 60's style, it's a part of his sexappeal, it's also part of his mask he shows to the world.