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by hatochiisai

schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was really exotic and unexpected. I enjoyed Reid's little lectures and the change of 'villian'.

Hotch and Kaze was hilarious. Then the deep swooning kiss at the end was yum. Im glad Garcia caught it on her camera phone. Please keep writing this series. I'd like to see Spencer jogging with Blitz and see Mr Henri Matiss "you know better!" react to "The Screaming Thing's" body guard. (I keep seeing an old America's Funniest Home Videos in my mind playing the one with the big dog just lifting his leg and peeing on the little yappy dog bouncing around his legs).

And I would love to hear about Reid's training to be Blitz's handler when the dog becomes an FBI/BAU dog. (you DID have Strauss saying Reid needed a pet - this is REID. You know he isn't going to do that NORMALLY).

Great story.
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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