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Ok, what happens next?

A very promising start to what appears to become an interesting story. I know that you have my attention. Very nicely written. Looking forward to what happens to John and his child. Good job!

Poor John. He has definitely not had an easy life. However, that seems to about to change for John. I love how caring and loving Sherlock is with John. I especially adore it at the end when Sherlock asks John to bond with John, something that he did not have to do. Aside from a few errors, another good chapter.

I had lot of fun reading this story despite the rushed ending.

I await the next chapter with baited breath.

I am enjoying reading this story so far. One thing kind of stood out to me though, but that's just because I'm a science geek and I know too much random trivia. John self impregnating means both sets of of the baby's chromosomes comes from him, which would be the same concept as an asexual pregnancy. Meaning that the offspring are clones of their mother, or in this case, parent, which means they would be the same gender, being as they are in fact an identical clone. John couldn't be carrying a girl if he's self impregnated, the baby would be a boy, that's just how genetics works.

otherwise, I am enjoying this story.

I think I may be the only putz leaving reviews on Sherlock BBC. I certainly can't be the only one enjoying your story. Anyone else want to share the love out there? Good reviews make writer's muses happy. Anyway... Love your work!

So glad to see more of this! You're updating fast. I'm really enjoying your story. Boy, that doctor was a piece of work!

Loving this. Keep up the good work.

Fantastic. I'm in love with them both!