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by Jayded

person eternityjewel
schedule May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well done. a few grammatical errors, but nothing big. i felt the characters were pretty true to themselves. i would read more of this. thanks for writing/posting.
person Sel
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this . It would be a great story. Very well done.
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Pleasepleaseplease write more? Pretty please? With a moose on top?