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by hatochiisai

person tj
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
omg this is so good and sad
i wish there was a recovery fic after this
schedule July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Normally I love your stuff. But this...this was awful to read. So much abuse upon Reid!! I...choked up! Well written, but I wish that there was more justice for poor Reid.
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really found this story deliciously dark. It was just the right amount of scary, and I really would recommend it to all those who enjoyed Criminal Minds fanfiction.
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My god, wrench out my heart and beat with it, this was....awful, terrifying and very realistic. The writing is amazing, the emotions jump off the page. The whole ordeal everyone goes through, is very real and apparent. The ending seemed a tidbit rushed, but it was still good. Amazing work. If absolutely heart wrenching and tear-jerking.
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please. You must write a continuation, a conclusion or an epilogue or something. I am in mental pain over Reid. AND for Morgan, Hotch and Rossi. This is horrific and terrible and a part of me says unsurvivable. I almost rooted for that bullet to take Reid out. I need some sort of idea of how the team will progress from here.
person Sable
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have never been so affected by a FF as much as this one. I was I incredibly horrified and yet could not stop reading this fantastic piece you have written. Thank you for allowing me to be so avid in this read.
person Kiki
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fucking amazing story!
person pipinheart
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM

This is terrible thing that happened to Spencer, he is strong, and is lucky hi friends are by his side.
person Amalia21_6a
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. Parts were hard to read but, that just how great of a writer you are. So happy that you focus on Morgan, Reid, Rossi and Hotch.
person Trahnfisch
schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! this was... wow... i don't know if i know enough words in english to say how hard this was...

but great, too... will you write a sequel... with love and slash and comfort and love and... you know what i mean :-)