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for Surprise!

by aineko

person LadyGrey
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Super cute. I cottoned on to what he'd done right away, although I was thinking that just his name would be somehow not right -- then I thought, maybe just his initials, JHW, but in the end I truly love the notion of all thrity-seven letters. Although I'll admit, I thought it would be the other way around, after reading Learning Curve... anyway, I'd like to read more of your Sherlock and John, so I'll be checking back, update soon! ~LG
person pftb
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
breathtakingly, magnificently beautiful. i sure hope you're published for something somewhere. you have an extraordinary talent that you should profiting from in some way since you so selflessly provide us with the gift of your words.
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the tatoo!
The BEST!!!
person Da Jeong
schedule January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That ending had to be the cutest freaking thing EVER!!

I nearly died from the cuteness!! ^^

Great job!
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the overall plot of the story, it was cute. But you could have written it about anyone. When you write a fanfic you are using characters you did not create. So you have to make it sound like them, and this didn't sound like them.