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for Lorelai's Bad Day

by GGMore

person LL72
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You can't go wrong with a good Rory/Lorelai slash and this is better than most. The banter rings true to character, the pace is just right (neither jumping into bed or writing an epic romance which leads to sex a hundred pages in) and if the lead up seems a little contrived, well it's hard to make up a realistic scenario for a Mom and daughter (trust me I've tried). I'm certainly looking forward to more in this series.
person sw
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. Very good start. Needs a little bit more proofreading but the content is there. If the author is reading please make them lick butts in future chapters.