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by darkangel1210

schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
second chapter: great.
Poor Jhon, trying to denie what he feels. Of course is totally understandable, because "he is straigh", and this is Sherlock we are talking about; anything with him, including a relationship will be hard, and a BDSM relationship?
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schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
>///<
I think i'm gona combust in the next chapter...i started already in this one!!!
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shi**! Call the 911! I'm on FIRE!!!! XD
That was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! And beautifull. You wrote Jhon as a perfect Sub. Sherlock must be happy... ;)
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Loving the scenes!
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dear God. Its inhumane, what you're doing. The intensity, the tension between Sherlock and John is almost tangible, and yet you insist on tormenting me with slow updates. Inexcusable! Jobs aren't as important as smut!
obviously I'm kidding. But excellent update. I was serious about the intensity level between the two, that's magic, to make us feel it through words the way you do.
And good chapter edit, by the way, I started the story over from the beginning just now and it flows perfectly.
person blisblop
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the very sane and sensual take on BDSM.Hardly anyone addresses the utter importance of aftercare and bringing the sub down from the scene, this forms bonds and shows a son's talents and commitment almost more so then the scene, this is where you can see if this is just a power tripping abuser not a partner nor even a playmate one can trust.Yes, very well done.
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! You are an amazing writer! I'm fairly new to the world of "Sherlock" but I've fallen in love with the series. You've written both Sherlock and John so entertaining and yet perfectly in-character. The sensual tension you've written, the way John discovers his desire of Sherlock (who is the PERFECT Dom!), the way you allow the scenes to unfold with no rush, you are a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing this with the fandom! I must now go look up your other writings. Keep up the amazing work!
person delia cerrano
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Very interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dear God. John makes such a good sub. Well, really they make good pair. Sherlock is equally talented. But, I do feel like you've lost some of the Voice you usually have with Sherlock. I would suggest rewatching a new episode before your next chapter. Everything else is marvelous.
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel like you updated this chapter just for me. Again, perfection. Loved it. I feel like Sherlock could be crueler, but I know he's working up to that. Do not give up on this story. I need it like a need air, and you wouldn't deprive me of air, would you?