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December 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
DAAAAAMN GIRL YOU'RE A BAD BITCH. Ahem...Had to get that out of my system. This is just so perfect and so delicious. Please, Sherlock, more...
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December 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this.
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August 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the dynamic you have set up between these two...and i love the way things are heading and various ideas that are being set up for the future. Very well written and the characters are written well if not definatly your own version of them, but doesn't mean they are not those characters we know and love. Can't wair to read more xx
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July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This entire piece is brilliant! The flow is well organized and the intimate scenes between John and Sherlock are quite moving. It's my opinion that you're staying true to the nature of the characters, taking into consideration their quirks and psychological hurdles. I could very easily see something like this happening, you did THAT well. Cheers love! I would absolutely love to see more of this piece!
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July 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I just stumbled across your story yesterday and I have to say it's absolutely Tantalizing! It's so well written!! What I like best about it is that it's believe able. I can visualize this relationship between John and Sherlock and it's not a stretch of the imagination. You do the characters as they are in the show justice for sure. II have been consistently on the edge of my seat throughout this thrilling ride, I can't wait to see what happens next! You're a marvelous writer and story spinner. Keep it up please!
Sincerely,
CJ
I just stumbled across your story yesterday and I have to say it's absolutely Tantalizing! It's so well written!! What I like best about it is that it's believe able. I can visualize this relationship between John and Sherlock and it's not a stretch of the imagination. You do the characters as they are in the show justice for sure. II have been consistently on the edge of my seat throughout this thrilling ride, I can't wait to see what happens next! You're a marvelous writer and story spinner. Keep it up please!
Sincerely,
CJ
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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please tell you haven't abandoned this story!!!!!
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June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love t so much that I hate the end of the chapter. I don't want to wait. I'm so jealous of John. I want Sherlock to be my Dom. Please, I'm begging yupdate soon. I just might go crazy if you don't.
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May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing work. Love it.
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May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of the hottest story I've read! It seems so realistic. The only negative thing I would say is there are a few typos, i.e. too/to, their/they're/there. It's just my own tendency to proof read as I enjoy reading. It takes my mind away momentarily. Other than that it's an awesome story. I can't wait for more!
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April 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I lost my mind over the orgasm denial bit, was completely immersed in it. OMG you are soo good. Granted the last two chapters wern't my fav but this one is. Ummm there is one or two instances where the grammar was off a little. Look it over and you'll see it. A place where there should have been the pronoun 'it' but you left it out. And another place where the inclusion of a hyphen/- was odd.