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for The Embrace

by bonnyblonde

person Ephiny Jones
schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was WONDERFUL! Both were written beautifully in-character, and it's...well, okay, it's what I dreamed happened after he rescued her! I have to admit, I didn't give it much thought when Daryl was in the cell when he returned with Merle rather than just up on the catwalk. Gives me food for thought (or maybe I'm just an obsessed fangirl, haha). Not to mention, those love scenes...wow! Talk about passionate!

I hope you'll consider writing another story with these two!
person Conni
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I digged around to find some good stories, found yours and i´m stunned that we´ve the same interests again. I´m recently became a junkie of the walking dead and my favourite is Daryl of course. Great quality as usual, perfect love - scene between Carol and Daryl, I love this fic... and i´m keen on more of course !

Conni
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a review for chapter one: Good start to a good story. I liked how you portrayed Daryl, right on character
person spikesslayer08
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and I'm totally hooked. I love their sweet convosation in his "room" it so so romantic but I love how at the end you have carol asking him if he wants to "screw around" had me laughing. Are you on fanfiction.net as well? Looking forward to reading more.
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Ending the chapter during the build up? You tease!! :)
person Robin
schedule December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! I like the tie-in with the "nine lives".
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Looking forward to reading the rest. :)