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for The Girl

by fandarkly

person Anonymous
schedule April 18, 2022 at 12:00 AM
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Really enjoyed this story. I would have ended with Cam revealing her true nature for a cliffhanger.

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person alex
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. I wish you'd continue it.
person Midknight
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A good start. But, the portrayal of John feels off. He would be more suspicious. And, maybe, just maybe a little more focus on the sex. Just a thought.