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for Emotional Storm

by hatochiisai

person delia cerrano
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So nice. Like the couple almost as much as Morgan/Reid. The reparte between them was great!! Really like a one shot every once in a while. Long chapter stories just drive me crazy sometimes waiting for the next chapter & that will probably end in another cliffhanger!
person Dramaya
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I simply had to create an account here, in order to review your story. I follow you on ff.net, but I'm really annoyed with their policy. But let's get to the point... I loved this story! I've always believed that Rossi/Reid paring has a lot of potential in itself and with the right author their love will blossom. And you did it! Although Emotional Storm is rather short (compared to my reading standards :) it has all necessary parts: drama, suspense and some loving. I would love to reading something longer with them as a main couple. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
person Trahnfisch
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i liked this story (jeah... as if you could write something that i don't like.... not gonna happen, i think :-) )

it was really strange to read a reid/rossi... but it was good! i liked this italian in there...

thank you very much and keep writing... can't wait for another one from you!
person I'm Nova
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That's good! Really| But, I'm italian...and it made me giggle like mad. I understand that you used google translate or something similar. It's a pity, but their grammar is at least questionable.
As for the endearments...some are pretty weird in my language(I know pet names are totally private and sometimes random, but I think fagiolino has not commonly the same connotation of someone lanky as bean) and some else were literary and archaic (mio diletto...I don't think I ever heard someone alive use it). Now, being Rossi old...it could be justified.
I have to repeat : I liked it!!!
I have no account here, but if you want to insert Italian bits in your next fanfics, you could find me at fanfiction.net as I'm Nova. Send me a PM or a random review with your desired translations and I'll be happy to do them for you. So every Italian reader won't have your beautiful angsty mood disrupted.
person Jekkah
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sweet damn that was hot! Love what you did with this story. :D