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schedule May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story, abrupt ending, though. I liked Sam's POV, it was both chilling and amusing.
schedule December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sam being soulless and cold is definitely rather hot! I loved that you did this all through his pov. Great job.
person Jenny Jerusalem
schedule November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A visceral and salacious literary treat. One that sent shivers down my spine and left me wishing some of the 'soulless' men in my life were half as efficient as our well-hung but heartless Sam.
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice, well written and hot, but feels unfinished and there are some pronoun confusions that just jarrs the reader out of the narative.
person Kimzie
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Another good story. I'd like to have Sam deflower me.