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for Planetary Hostage 2

by Genuka

person Nova
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you.
I'm sorry if I came out as pushy or something about the lemony goodness. I just love them. And blame it on Jack's pheromones. ;)
person Nova
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You don't need to thank me. I need to thank you for updating the story here! Let me remember you again - most people are awfully lazy at rewieving, even the stories they very much enjoy. God knows I'm usually guilty enough of that!
About this chapter: clever, clever Jack! So the Time Lords tried for yet another 'get back' plan, uh? I got a little sad about his exposition, though. Given Torchwod 3 was probably the one exception to the rule. One Ianto was enough to keep them running...oh well, they were very few.
About next chapter: I'm drooling...
person Nova
schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can only agree with your analysis of Jack. My point was that on 19-21 century Earth it was pretty impossible to have any medic with knowledge of his biology when even he understood very little of it, so he was excused. Master and Doctor had at very least each other (Doctor met Rani too in the past I think), so if they could stop their fighting kind of foreplay long enough...well, they wouldn't, of course. It would be OOC.

How would they have talked? No idea, but it would be a crazy thing, imho. Beautiful chapter, as always.
person Nova
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
And terribly funny how Doctor is so trascurate with his own health. Oh well, the cobbler goes around barefoot I guess (it's a saying in my region). Jack is the one with the most excuse, anyway. "Knowledge of his own biology" isn't something he had after coming back, to begin with, so...
Thank God Martha is around.
person Nova
schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Updated just for me! I feel so honored!!!! (blush)

Everything was beautifully written. Thank you for healing Master. He's still a badass, but he's his own(or the pack's?), not Rassilion's pawn.

Thank you very much for writing this and wanting to share. I'm sure that even if no one else reviews (people can be very lazy) there are many people sharing this feeling.
person Nova
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Happy happy happy me!

I loved the prequel to this, and now back on aff I found this sweet thing. Eager to know the Tardis' gifts. And when Jack won't grate on anyone's nerves... I expect the Harkness charm © to finally work. Hint threesome at least hint.