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for Planetary Hostage 2

by Genuka

schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm looking forward to the next bit where Martha gets to choosing a mate process. I actually started writing the claiming process in 1969. It'll will be a while before I post but you've given me a little inspiration.
person Nova
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it all the way!!!!
Will happily see any additional ficlets, but if you want to close it here I'll understand.
person Nova
schedule November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I so like how the Master thinks.
Thank you for giving us another chapter!
person Nova
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the room! WhatI wouldn't give to snoop around in Jack's closet...
And even if I clamored for sex before...Doctor being skittish isn't bad at all.
person Nova
schedule November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do hope to God this will show. You got sad, I'm sorry. How frustrated do you think I was, having written half a paper? I cursed like a sailor.
Onto what matters: Thank you so very much for updating so much and so soon! Christmas has come early!
About past chapters: <3 Tardis <3 (insert starry eyed emoticon. )Not-Joffrey was clearly suicidal. You don't piss off time lord without reason otherwise. The politicians...they were prats, but that's what they usually are, so you were pretty accurate. Loved the Doctor: "Couldn't they phone?". LOL!!!
About new chapters: Wow! So Jack is one step closer to being a proper Timelord. Perhaps this way he'll get it and tone down a bit his Automatic Flirt Mode. If not Master will need a loong conversation (we all know he's the jealous type...and the Doctor too. Look at Nine!). And I wanted to hug Doctor when he was all "Don't need a home! Tardis is home!". Much love to you as always
person Nova
schedule November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...Thank you so very much for updating so much and so soon! Christmas has come early!
About past chapters: <3 Tardis <3 (insert starry eyed emoticon. )Not-Joffrey was clearly suicidal. You don't piss off time lord without reason otherwise. The politicians...they were prats, but that's what they usually are, so you were pretty accurate. Loved the Doctor: "Couldn't they phone?". LOL!!!
About new chapters: Wow! So Jack is one step closer to being a proper Timelord. Perhaps this way he'll get it and tone down a bit his Automatic Flirt Mode. If not Master will need a loong conversation (we all know he's the jealous type...and the Doctor too. Look at Nine!). And I wanted to hug Doctor when he was all "Don't need a home! Tardis is home!". Much love to you as always
person Nova
schedule November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't seem to send my thoughts. I hate this, I even signed up to mp you and I can't see how. How can I?
person Nova
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved the mention of Doctor tossing manuals when they don't agree with him! Lol!
As always, waiting for next chapter.
Committee? What committee? Hopefully (for them) somehow timelord-broken...
I'll love your Lucy whenever you bring her in (next chapter or not), I'm sure. She was a somehow remarkable woman in canon (at least imho).
person Nova
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm still asking myself why Martha got dubbed the child in all this.
Oh well, of course I know why, and can even agree with the reasoning...but seriously.
I do not know what caused it but I'm inclined to think it's their fault, somehow (or perhaps I'm just a tiny bit predjudiced against Master as a trublemaker, sorry).
Even if it is not, well...it appears they should not be left alone unsupervised at any time. Children, much?
person Visitor
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been enjoying this fic - couldn't put it down! I'd love to read how they consummate the bond though - has the poor Master ever been able to have a proper Gallifreyan relationship? It sounds like Rassilon prevented him from experiencing proper intimacy.