rate_review Reviews

I love your stuff. I think you and I have the same kinks and taste, and I think you are a brilliant writer. But, I do have to give you some constructive criticism: in this series increasingly it feels that you are writing Matthew and not Reid. Reid feels OOC, he is a man of science, yes he has feelings and he is vulnerable, but in case of survival he is usually logical, doing whatever is needed to survive (Ex of OOC: refusing to eat while lost in the wild because it was a bunny). Another OOC thing is how easily Reid's been using bad language. Yes, he uses it in case of great strain, but not in usual, normal everyday conversation or even playful conversation (that's something Matthew does, not Reid). Reid tries to provoke Morgan now and again, even Aaron I suppose in a universe they're lovers, but he is always on the polite side. (Ex of OOC: “Fuckin’ itchy things…”)

But I do love your work, please don't take this as flames.