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by Harpling

person Tahn
schedule September 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what's in the epilogue?
person Rowen
schedule March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just... man. I can't even begin to describe how much I enjoyed reading this. You wrote their personalities and mannerisms so well.

The story was so detailed and indepth. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story.
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. You write Sherlock's thoughs, his mind, very well.
Lets see, or more like, lets read what happens next!
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
jajajajajaja! I laugh so much with this chapter (3). My favorite phrase: “Fangirl? Yes, of course. A group of young males singing together would appeal most to adolescent girls and young gay men. I need to find one of them!” I almost pee my pants! XDXDXDXDXD
And of course, Jhon mocking of Sherlock with his new hobby...that was really funny.
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Jejejej, Sherlock was jelous. I love jelous...well, when it isn't me who is feeling them...:P
Of course the Rusian prisioner was watching Jhon like that. I mean, he is huge (the prisioner), and Jhon is little, and has this face that says: "I'm clueless, do me" XD
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
>///<
Sexy!!!!!
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!
Love that last stament of Jhon about "jumping from buildings" XD
What about the epilogue?
person Jags
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh very nice. Also hot. Keep it up and please keep me updated.
person Jags
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I can't wait to read more. It may be my tablet but there seems to be a formatting error in which half the story is coppied at the end of the chapter. Just letting you know.
person jags
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. great detail. i really hope you finish it. it would be great if you could email me at lonewolfjags@gmail.com when you update. thank you