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WOW you have a new fan!  Great plot line (okay it's about sex but done well)!  More please.

I found the first chapter to be quite good. Its kinda short but like you said its your first fan fic so its understandable. Mine kinda started out short too. I'm interested in reading more after you get more but I guess I should read the rest of what you have done lol.

Ok as I read the rest of the story I found some grammatical errors but they were few and far between. Just letting you know so you can keep an eye on it later. As for the story line it's really well done but I think the part with Penny happened a bit to fast. You have Lennard's character down really well along with Sheldon's but no offense I think Joul's character is a bit erratic with a few things. All in all it's a good story. keep up the good work. :)

I'm going to be honest, I've been checking back to the BBT section for the last few weeks hoping for an update. Tonight, I said you know what, tonight is the last night I'm going to look at the BBT section. If they do not update, then I'm not reading anymore. THANK YOU FOR UPDATING THE BEST STORY TO HAPPEN TO BBT! Seriously, I'm in it more for the writing style as if you are one of the show's writers than the lemons, which while there have been none which is slightly dissappointing. It's not the end of the world, nor the story I hope. Please update again soon, I love this story.

I love this story, please get to the m/f part soon. I can't wait for it, well obviously I can otherwise I would be leaving like six or seven of the same reviews. But anyways, love your story and hope your other stories have the same luck with brillance.