rate_review Reviews

Sweet! I give this story an A++. I've got to tell you that if the show was actually more like THIS, I'm sure a lot more would have watched it, even though the show was good itself. This story was great, dealing with feeling as well as submissive and dominant sex. If it was still going, I'd suggest a chapter with Cat too, but oh well, just those 2 are good enough. Anyway, sweet story bro.

This is such a fantastic story, got to say that I've been following your writing ever since I happened upon 'Elle's Pain Slut' through the Heroes section all that time ago, finally decided to start putting my two cents because this story is just too good and I want to see it go and go and go, hopefully at least until Tori and Jade get to the really naughty stuff.

Love every word of it MTL, I really, really hope you continue with this one.

Just wanted to say how much I love you're writing;
Starting with the beautifully intimate nature of the relationships you build with your borrowed characters- and I especially enjoy the steady, unstoppable escalation of intensity in the things your characters get up to.
I will (and have already) read everything and anything you write, but I've been particularly enjoying this story- hoping desperately to see another chapter with Tori and Jade.
But short of that- so long as you keep writing anything I'll be happy.

I really love your story! It has to be one of the best Victorious stories I have ever read. Also, do you think you could add a little footworship between Jade and Tori. Maybe you could have Tori suck on Jade's toes and licking her soles.