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Wow. Just wow. This story left me breathless. I rarely leave reviews, but I couldn't possibly have left this beauty of a story without one. Your writing flowed so purely and actually made me feel both John and Sherlock's pain. Made me feel as if this could have been a plausible branch off for the series. Just... my goodness. I loved it. Every word and the ending left me feeling both happy and needing more. Thank you so much for writing this.

I don't often review stories on this site, but damn did this one compel me to. This was amazing. I literally feel like Watson when Sherlock first made his deductions about John's life. Awed and amazed. I cried so much reading this fic. It was beautifully sad and you really made the connection between Sherlock and Watson tangible. The ending... oh god the ending. I was weeping. Not crying, weeping by the end of it. My family was wanting to know what was wrong with me. I could only tell them I was reading a sad/happy ending. All in all beautifully written, you really captured Sherlock's character which is not an easy task.

All in all, beautiful story, and I hope to read more of your work.

-Scarlette

Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for writing this piece, it was refreshing and heartwarming. I'll be expecting the sequel wholeheartedly!

*sound of breathing slowly controlled*

Oh my, this is one of the best, most emotional and very very *very* true to my own personal take of John and Sherlock. they characters are flawed and very raw in a way, that makes them very very real. sherlocks consius effort to make John know that he cares is breathtaking and the deepth of Johns greif...wow

Read it. loved it. so recomend it!

Oh I love this story! I can't wait to see the sequel!

Bravo

As before beautiful. Please keep me posted. I can't wait to read more.

that was really good and shaping up to be something marvelous. please continue and when you do email me at lonewolfjags@gmail.com. thank you

I've really been enjoying this story. Sherlock post-Reichenbach and return seems true to himself, and John keeping his pain to himself as much as he can seems "true" too. But how sad, even at the very end of Ch 8! Poor John, poor Sherlock - I hope they can begin to get some of this out in the open between the two of them at least!
I am looking forward anxiously to the next chapter(s)!

I just finished watching the first season of Sherlock so I didn't understand some of the references that you made in your story but I love it! I love how you even managed to capture Sherlock's way of thinking! I can't wait for the next chapter(s). Please update soon!