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by hatochiisai

schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I come to read the full version here. (wink)

OMG!!! This is totally INSANE!! But INCREDIBLE AWESOME!! I had read some of threesome fics, but never read foursome before, and OMG!! You have no idea how many times I HAVE TO stop myself from squealing and gasping becoz I read this on the skytrain!!! I can't believe that our little naughty Spencer could be this damn sexy and HAWT!

OK, I know you get the idea how much I LOVE this story now. XD

PS. I couldn't help myself but LOL at this part. :D
"What are you doing in there?"
"Checking the pipes. Go away."
Hahaha!!!
person DC
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmmmmmmm... very nice. Enjoyed how the night started with dancing and fun before moving. I can so see Reid as a clean freak like that
Well done!
person Eneath
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! really enjoyed that!
person Lilablassblau
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was directed here from fanfiction . net - because of all the stupid rules. I know some of your stories (I'm in love with all your Hotch/Reid), so I knew you are amazing at writing lemons and I didn't want to miss it. Well, I didn't expect THIS - a FOURSOME! Holy crap, this was... intense. I never thought I would like anything with Hotch being a bottom but this... it was good, it was fitting. I mean, even less than Hotch bottoming (is this a word?) I could imagine Rossi being bottom, so yeah, as always: perfectly done. No need to say something about Morgan and Reid, perfectly sweet as always. I love them as a pair, I love Hotch and Reid as a pair and well, anyone with Reid (because, you may have figured out: I'm a fan of Reid).
But what impressed me kinda the most (and I don't really know why) was the scene at the beginning. How you worked in all of these song lyrics and titles... amazing. I was listening to all of them in my head, one after the other and I could really imagine them dancing there. I've read a lot of fictions (because I'm german and writing english... nah, so I'm just reading) but I've never seen a dancing seen described so well, so vivid. I mean, how are you writing if your muse IS co-operating?!
So, just to say, I'm a huge fan of your work and I'll follow you even here because, hell, we all know this whole M-Rating shit (sorry for my language) on fanfiction . net going on right now is just hilarious.
Love Lilablassblau
person Herky Illiniwek
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG
This was FABULOUS and DELICIOUS!!

I want a sequel... we need a Round 2!! :))

::HUGE HUGS::

:)) :D ;-)
person Thn0715
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy hot damn! I'm not really one for the DP stuff, but that was smokin' hot! I love that Rossi got involved near the end. (You know how I feel about Hotch/Rossi!) And all of them wrapped up around each other asleep was a great way to end it. Great stuff, as usual!
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Just what I was looking for. You never fail me.Cant wait for you to give us more stories like this one.
person Omg
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think you out did yourself this time, It was so damn hot and sexy.
person 68luvcarter
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This was unbelievably hot. I have a feeling I will be reading it over and over again.....