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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A nice story, with good pacing, but the fact that your spell checker got the better of you distracts from your story. Expression and excretion are both words, but hardly interchangeable. Little things like "do down" instead of "go down" or "attacked to him" instead of "attached to him", etc., are scattered throughout the story. Those darn spell checkers can be tricky to us all! :-)