rate_review Reviews

Hi there!
Well first congrats because you write very well, been English or not, your first languaje (mine either)
Second, love the fic, specially the kind of..."pushy" Sherlock, who didn't stop until he got what he wanted ;)

I quite enjoyed your story. I'm not very good at constructive criticism but I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical errors, which is something that drives me crazy so that means you did good. :) Especially for English not being your first language! I love the set up of this happening after the pool episode. It wasn't until Sherlock ripped the bomb vest off of John, threw it across the room, and immediately started fussing over him that I really started to like them as a couple. That scene was touching, and of course my slash fangirl mind instantly pictured something like this happening afterward. ;) It was very nice to see it written out, and executed so well to boot! I think you did very nicely keeping them in character. I could picture it, hear the actors' voices. You've done great in setting the scene.

Overall, well done, and I hope to read more from you in the future. :)