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June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You really are an OUTSTANDING writer! Your sexual descriptions are flawless, I love the build-up to climax and the details are so vivid the words come alive- fantastic! I can't muster the courage to post anything here because your stories are SO much better than mine- they are wonderful, really!!!
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April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O.O You have a way with words!
That's about the only coherent thought I manage to write. I'll probably say something more when I read it .. like 3 more times :D
And YESSS!! Thank you for continuing writing about The Mentalist!
That's about the only coherent thought I manage to write. I'll probably say something more when I read it .. like 3 more times :D
And YESSS!! Thank you for continuing writing about The Mentalist!
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March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was positively awesome. It's gotta be one of the very few times I've read a story centering around Red Badge and including sex. And it had such a convincing reason here, too. I'm guessing she didn't want to think about his own motivations for "helping" her achieve.. relaxation, though her rational mind made an appereance more than once.
I caught some typos here and there, and while they were a little distracting, the story held its own powerful appeal. I really like that you gave it background, reminded the reader how helpless she was in that situation and truly made the sex to be more than a taken opportunity and lust. Maybe it wasn't making love but I feel it was somewhere in the middle. I love how much it affected him.
I really hope to read more from you soon, as I really like how you portray their voices. And of course, you write their passion amazingly.
FYI, there's a "kink meme" somewhere on livejournal. I believe it's multi-fandom, and there's a lack of Mentalist fics. I'm not too much of a fan of reading weird, twisted kinks nor I think they'd suit the characters but I believe there's a few (handcuffs, blindfold, possibly one at the office, etc) that I think would kick ass :P
I caught some typos here and there, and while they were a little distracting, the story held its own powerful appeal. I really like that you gave it background, reminded the reader how helpless she was in that situation and truly made the sex to be more than a taken opportunity and lust. Maybe it wasn't making love but I feel it was somewhere in the middle. I love how much it affected him.
I really hope to read more from you soon, as I really like how you portray their voices. And of course, you write their passion amazingly.
FYI, there's a "kink meme" somewhere on livejournal. I believe it's multi-fandom, and there's a lack of Mentalist fics. I'm not too much of a fan of reading weird, twisted kinks nor I think they'd suit the characters but I believe there's a few (handcuffs, blindfold, possibly one at the office, etc) that I think would kick ass :P