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for A Quick Jog

by MsBotin

person Oric13
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
At first I was pretty disappointed when I clicked on the link of this story and saw that it was only like a single page of writing, and so my mouse cursor went straight away to the BACK button of my browser.
But I'm glad I paused for a moment because this really was a very enjoyable ficlet.
Aside from it being quite erotic you also managed to make the characters sound like they do on the show, which I feel is a huge pro for any fanfiction.
And the size of this fic ended up being just right.
So nicely done, MsBotin.