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for Take My Breath Away

by Mr_Asher_Ethan

schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first, that was HOT! Like that, in capital letters, and if i could, i'll write it in bold, color it red, and put flames behind it!
Second, it wasn't only hot, but cute, specially Jhon's declaration while hunging Sherlock, that was lovely.
Thanks for the onechot
schedule March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story!