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by mermaidnz

person mitzier
schedule February 5, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Great story. Update soon

person Eni
schedule February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just found your story today. it is great. do hope you will continue it.
hope to read more in the near future
person Iffi
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I'm not a nativ english speaker, so sorry for my lack of english.
I really enjoy your story and already reread it several times.
the tension between danny and steve is good to understand. i hope they find a way to get together.

i hope you update soon, because i'm thilled to read about them, kono, chin and thee others again.
have a nice day
Iffi
person Angela
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is really awesome, I hope you update soon. I enjoyed it so much that I went back and read your other stories as well and I enjoyed them too. I don't know if you do already but you should consider posting this to Archive of Our Own because there are a lot of Hawaii Five-O fans who post their stories there and it could expose your story to more people. You have a really good grasp on the characters so I can't wait for the next chapter.