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July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this story because it make so turned in. I love this story so much, so please update.
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October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent fanfic and let no one tell you different. You manage to convey that Spencer, Aria, and Hanna are all planning on seducing Emily on the same night extremely well. You had just enough subtly to make it work, and A's text message was brilliant. Emily's apparent obliviousness is also delicious.
I do wonder if there's any truth what so ever to Hanna and Aria losing boyfriends.
This is just beautiful. One could rant about plausibility, but this is exactly the kind of situation I love. This carries a wonderful energy and humor that makes me want to continue onward.
Spencer watching Cum Gaggers 3? I'd at least think she'd be into something more creative.
I love how amazingly tame Aria's answers to everything are. It's so like her.
So, the first girl on girl here is Sparia! Yay! Probably the most classic BFF pair on the show, and I do love BFF ships. So, there we go...
I wonder. If A knows all four are lesbians, might all of A's shit on the Liars just be a set of homophobic hate crimes? That would be an AWESOME twist.
Spanking would be better than kissing IMO, as a punishment.
"Kiss Aria." Hanna said, then when Emily gave her a funny look added, "What? Everyone else has."
Hm. Honestly, Emily has a right to see it differently. After all, the other girls seem to have just been playing around, while she's actually a lesbian. Sure, they all are, but Emily doesn't know that. Honestly it seems a bit meaner to make Emily do it.
It might be slightly odd that they've all decided that Aria is the one on the receiving end of the sexual dares.
Okay, I ended up never finishing this review, but I assume that you would rather have the half finished one than no review.
I do wonder if there's any truth what so ever to Hanna and Aria losing boyfriends.
This is just beautiful. One could rant about plausibility, but this is exactly the kind of situation I love. This carries a wonderful energy and humor that makes me want to continue onward.
Spencer watching Cum Gaggers 3? I'd at least think she'd be into something more creative.
I love how amazingly tame Aria's answers to everything are. It's so like her.
So, the first girl on girl here is Sparia! Yay! Probably the most classic BFF pair on the show, and I do love BFF ships. So, there we go...
I wonder. If A knows all four are lesbians, might all of A's shit on the Liars just be a set of homophobic hate crimes? That would be an AWESOME twist.
Spanking would be better than kissing IMO, as a punishment.
"Kiss Aria." Hanna said, then when Emily gave her a funny look added, "What? Everyone else has."
Hm. Honestly, Emily has a right to see it differently. After all, the other girls seem to have just been playing around, while she's actually a lesbian. Sure, they all are, but Emily doesn't know that. Honestly it seems a bit meaner to make Emily do it.
It might be slightly odd that they've all decided that Aria is the one on the receiving end of the sexual dares.
Okay, I ended up never finishing this review, but I assume that you would rather have the half finished one than no review.
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January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome!! :o) Four hotter-than-hot hotties fucking and they're gonna be a four-way relationship? It's hot and it would be nice to see a really nice poly love story. I love your other stories and the hard fucking is awesome but I'm also a sucker for the love stories, and I really like moresome love stories.