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for It's Gotta Stop

by AlishaV

person Reno the Rabid
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MORE! NOW! -Bangs fist on desk in demand.- ....Pwease? -Puppy eyes.-
schedule November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nnf. Fucking hot. Loved some of the descriptions in there. Very...live...writing, like it was lived in the moment each step of the way. I especially loved the phrase where you talked about Dean watching "Sam's thoughts chase each other across his face." Creatively worded and quite cool. Anyway.

Nice work. :)

~Moonstar