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June 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You're easily my favorite writer on this site… consistently great work.
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February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Didn't think you'd ever actually continue this so imagine my surprise when I spotted it this morning with a new chapter. Overall very well written and pretty hot. I have to agree that the image in my head of Claudia in a shower is way too appealing. You know, you should also put your work on Archive of Our Own. People can easily find your work and download it if they want to and you can keep things a lot more organized. It's also a good idea to spread your work around as much as possible. I might be able to score you an invite if you're interested.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have some advice. Change the description for this story. With the way you wrote it, you make it sound like this is happening between Artie and Claudia rather than Pete and Claudia. I can certainly understand why people might not want to read that.
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December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're almost as cruel as the network is with their "cliffhangers" lol. Good job with giving Claudia that kind of bold innocence that comes from being inexperienced. She would definitely be bold, but when it comes to experimenting and learning about sex, just about everyone would be nervous. So keep that up. It's a learning experience, and it would be a little odd to jump over that.
Pete's reluctance is still there, as it should be, but at least he's starting to come around. You have to admire his self-control so far. I mean, how many could have a sexually curious girl like Claudia in their bed and retain any semblance of control? Not many, I tell you.
Anyway, do continue the story. I check back every day to see if there's a new chapter. Trust me, I know from experience how difficult it is to continue something when you get very little feedback. But you're writing something good here, it would be a shame not to finish it. :)
Pete's reluctance is still there, as it should be, but at least he's starting to come around. You have to admire his self-control so far. I mean, how many could have a sexually curious girl like Claudia in their bed and retain any semblance of control? Not many, I tell you.
Anyway, do continue the story. I check back every day to see if there's a new chapter. Trust me, I know from experience how difficult it is to continue something when you get very little feedback. But you're writing something good here, it would be a shame not to finish it. :)
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very cruel to just leave it there, but I've done it more than a few times with my stories. ;)
When I was a teenager, there was a girl who asked me to teach her about sex. I was still pretty new at it myself and she lived a sheltered life so I was a little reluctant. I was eating some cheerios when she asked me. Made it awkward when I dropped my spoon by surprise and nearly splashed myself in the face with milk. Still, I wasn't anywhere near as reluctant as Pete. ;)
When I was a teenager, there was a girl who asked me to teach her about sex. I was still pretty new at it myself and she lived a sheltered life so I was a little reluctant. I was eating some cheerios when she asked me. Made it awkward when I dropped my spoon by surprise and nearly splashed myself in the face with milk. Still, I wasn't anywhere near as reluctant as Pete. ;)
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A solid start to a promising story. I want to know what happens next!