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This story is so enjoyable. I wish we knew the ending! Thank you for posting it and making this wonderful contribution to the G/B fandom. 

Intriguing! I love the time travel angle and all the questions that Julian is having to grapple with concerning Garak. The hotness is a plus, as well:). I'm very curious to know whether future Garak knew Julian was going to be sent back in time... great storytelling!

Really, really interesting story. Surprising, but a person can still accept the premise of a relationship between the two. Bashir is particularly well written.

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I've only read the first four chapters of your epic story thus far, but so far Wow! What an inventive way to put Garak and Bashir together. This is a pairing I've always wanted to see get the proper treatment, and I think you've nailed it. I look forward to reading the rest of your story and any future chapters. I enjoy your take on both Bashir and Garak and to me you've captures their personalities perfectly.

A word of advice if you want your story to be noticed by more readers. You posted all 42 chapters in one day. You might want to post 2-3 chapters ever day or as often as you can, but not all at one time. When you post a new chapter your story goes to the top of the 'latest stories' list so more people just browsing find it. By posting all 42 chapters your story only hit the top of the list once then was dropped down as other authors added entries. By posting a few chapters with a break in between, you can keep your story at the top of the list more often so more people will see it.

Since this story is so long already, you could even delete some of the chapters and repost them as I've suggested to attract more readers and possible reviewers.

And now my ONLY somewhat negative suggestion/note and I only mention it because I have OCD (literally). In Roman numerals, 40 is written as XL, not XXXX. The fourth or ninth number is always expressed by placing the smaller denomination in front of the fifth or tenth, for instance IV is four as V is five, and IX is nine as X is ten. Here is the link for a Roman numerals chart that comes in handy. http://literacy.kent.edu/Minigrants/Cinci/romanchart.htm

Great job so far as I've read and I plan to read all the rest today or tomorrow (unless you take down a few chapters, but I'll definitely come back and read them once posted). Keep posting! You're off to an excellent start.

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