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June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loved it amazing & interesting
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June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loved it loved the criminal minds quote someone's is a CM fan lol so am i haha
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June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loved it i generally love dean & john but i would choose gabe & cas
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June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it love the mythology in the story
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June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loved it anything that you come up with will me awesome can't wait for more
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October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Though this story has potential to be wonderfully different, there are some serious issues with grammar, punctuation, capitalizing things that don’t warrant it and such that tend to detract from the enjoyment. You keep capitalizing kitsune when you shouldn’t. Doing that is like capitalizing dog, cow, horse, etc. Along with that, you have a habit of starting many sentences in paragraphs with the same work, making it read in an awkward way, detracting and throwing you off. There is also the fact that you don’t explain why Sam became a kitsune rather than have demon blood, or if you did, I didn’t catch it. That doesn’t seem to make sense as his powers come from a demonic source. Such a things make it confusing if you are incorporating it into the canon setting. Overall, it has potential and is an original idea! Kudos!