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for Mercy

by Taiven13

schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've read up to chapter 12, and there's so many good things about this piece. Your characterization is superb, the amount of description put in is a good balance, neither too much nor too little, and the action scenes are well done. The pacing can be a bit slow at times, but overall I'll keep reading until the conclusion, because your writing just draws me in.
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Totally didn't see that one coming! Now I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this fic and I can't wait for another update. Keep up the good work!