rate_review Reviews

I like this story, are you going to write more of this story?

This is an excellent story, I really enjoyed it. I hope you're still working on more chapters, I'd hate to think this story is abandoned. Either way, good job sir.

Great job. Only thing i could say would be an improvement is making marti's climax more vocal in quotation rather than description

damn, this is wicked hot!

Well written sex and the plotting seems to be getting better as well.

On the reviews, I agree that there is a lack (as a fellow writer I know how dispiriting it can be that no-one bothers to feedback good, bad or indifferent), but your vote rating suggests that others are reading and enjoying it, so hopefully this story will continue

Dude (or dudette) whatever you do dont stop this story its one of the few Ive read recently that I actually look forward to reading more of and seriously we need more of the story as well cos you gotta get more people involved such as the other girls on the squad and maybe have alice take her turn at Marti and whilst Marti's gotta serve the teacher then Alice can use her as her own personal sex toy, maybe have one of the other cheerleaders find out and in an attempt to help Marti to get free have her become trapped with her or maybe Marti will be too far gone by then and she can be the one to set them up. so seriously PLEASE DONT STOP!!!

Nice to see another Hellcats story. This is generally well written, but with no background build-up or story behind it there was a feeling it could have been anyone. If you do future stories, perhaps a little more lead up would make us really see it as Marti