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February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At first, I thought Frasier was too out of character. The action was hot enough, however, to keep me reading. The ending was perfect, and explained the whole thing. The only thing I would have prefered you had done early on is tell the readers which Ray this was. Just one line gave it away, the one about his hair being plastered to his forehead. I like imagining Frasier with either Ray, but I think knowing which one you intended would have made the picture clearer. Great story, thank you.