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I really like thisso far, but you certainly could use a beta. I noticed some spelling and tense errors, but overall this is really good cosidering its not your first language. I would be happy to help you with grammer ect, but I don't claim to be an expert. Let me know if you want my help. I have a few stories on here if that helps your decison:) Anyway, I really do like your story and I hope you continue with the next chapter soon.

Oh, very interesting premise! Please continue!