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August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That paces itself perfectly. I'm not sure how you meant it to flow, but to me it reads like a monologue being spoken quickly while the figure paces the stage. I loved it!
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March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Eloquent.
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November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One never truly thinks about how desperately frustrating it must be to have a quicksilver mind trapped in the sluggish cage of a body. You get that across flawlessly. And still, even the most brilliant mind cannot exist alone and unloved. By the time I reached the final line, I had tears in my eyes. This was achingly beautiful, and utterly haunting.