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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
a great story of strength and overcoming. Thanks
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
glad to see Matt giving White Eagle a chance, worried about what the neighbours will think though
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October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really? You're leaving it there? You cruel thing! I was loving the happy family togetherness, then, WHAM! Don't leave it too long
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October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked this start. The dialogue and attitudes on meeting the neighbours feel very authentic. Only one little nitpicky thing, I'd like to see the apostrophe after the word darlin - darlin' - just 'cause it's a contraction.
Looking forward to the next installment
Looking forward to the next installment