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February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. There were some spots that threw me off, such as the word prat, not something either would use, but, overall, it was a good read. I would suggest finding a beta to put some polish on it and make sure your characters stay in 'voice' right, something you slipped out of here and there. But it was a good job! Kudos!