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schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought the shots were cute, and that the characters were in "character " but I have to admit my favorite one was the last. The affection, and caring, and humour. I lost track of the sex in that one and felt like you achieved a real intimacy there with the characters.
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh - he's certainly not the first man who has to learn about the difference between porn and real life, but he's definitely the funniest.

These are great, by the way- you deserve more reviews! And we deserve more stories! :)