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for Chemical Imbalance

by MysticWitchRini

schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
While your writing skills have room for improvement i am really enjoying your story! I'm more of a Tom/Harry fan but I like the C/V pairing as well. Your idea is fun and I loved how the doctor had to keep breaking them up. XD I could just picture his face! Do we get to see Tom and Harry next? Also, please don't take my first sentence baddly, it's only meant as constructive criticism I mean nothing mean by it. ^^ I am very eager to read more! ^^
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A voyager fic! And P/K too. This is great. One note for you, Chakotay isn't from India. He was raised in the Native American tradition. He was born on a planet in the demilitarized zone, so you might want to just stick to calling him Chakotay ...or I always liked Tay. Yay for the story. I hope to see more.