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for When The Lights Go Down In The City

by SamuelColt

schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I wasn't sure how I would feel about this story, but it was really hot! ;)
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy shit, that was hot. Speaking as someone who would have liked to see more of the interlude between Talbot and Eric, you captured the tenseness and Eric's manipulative nature at that moment incredibly well, but you may have gone, in my opinion, just a bit overboard with the descriptors. Not enough to turn me off the story, but a few of the adjectives were repeated a bit and lost some of their impact. All in all, a fabulous story and I can't wait to read more!
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So. Hot. I don't really know what else to say. x)
Accept please make more.
person Vyper
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It is so sinfully perfect.
person sris
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, that was really something. Very nicely written and highly enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Vampire fics are not my usual fare, but wow! I think you may have a convert. gripping, hot and the ending was a climax on top of a climax.