rate_review Reviews

an absolutely lovely plotline my dear!!!
and I wouldn't worry about how you wrote the sex scene, it was quite hot XD *fans self*

I did notice that the last update was some time ago, but I hope you haven't abandoned this piece.
I would love to see it continued :3

Wow, I hope that you update soon this is really a great story!

I dare say I quite enjoyed your buttsex! Lassy and Shawn are arguable one of the hottest couples evar! Excellent job my dear. Please write more Shawn learning what a little bottom bitch he truly is ;)

First off: the title. Absolutely amazing! It had me giggling and then the warning of M/M just had me excited to see how you would pull this off since I've never read a Shawn/Carlton fic before.

Second: the characters. I think you nailed the characterizations perfectly! Shawn would totally pretend to be gay just to wig his dad out and Carlton getting somewhat confused and having mixed signals from Shawn was just awesome.

Third: the sex. Wow. That was just hot, lol. Shawn's comments had me laughing.

Lastly: well done! You've officially gotten me addicted to Shawn/Carlton fics, and I think I'll go search for some more. Thanks for sharing!

Damn... that was hot.
Wow. -fans self-

Please keep up the great work!

Great work!